Workbook

FEEDBACK

This morning I received feedback for my FMP and  I'll list it based from how well I presented it,how I'll improve and the two things they liked about my product and the two things they suggested.

List two things you like about the product?

''I like the ideas behind the product and the good research''

''Showed that we made different choices towards the final idea and he had a lot of information about the final piece''

''Good research leading to final and the good drawing skills''

List two changes could you suggest?

''Speak more clear''

''Show more things towards the final product  and have more things drawings/artworks into final project''

''Use the good artwork you have created with your final product''

What did they do well in presenting?

• Eye contact 3
• Posture 3
• Gestures 3
• Interesting 3
• Confident 3
• Clear pronunciation 2
• Intonation 2
• Volume 2
• Good pace 2
• Well-organised 2

What do they need improving in presenting?

• Eye contact 0
• Posture 0
• Gestures 0
• Interesting 0
• Confident 0
• Clear pronunciation 1
• Intonation 1
• Volume 1
• Good pace 1
• Well-organised 1